The meetings start and planning begun as the second war continues. Harry gains some help.
(#) axelrajr 2008-07-13 10:21:37 PM
tons of fun.
if at all possible, i would enjoy it if hellsign showed up some more.
(#) skytime12 2008-07-13 10:46:44 PM
i like the saying 'Open the Gates of Hell' it sends chills down your spine. please write more
I like the story, though I thought it better before the Hellsing crossover. I saw the Crossover in the Genre section, but was hoping that the steam-magic universe was the cross.
Anyway, well done, though slightly clunky. Make sure that you place other sides of conversation in new lines.
"The other guy said"
Like that. Makes for easier reading.
(#) ficbob 2008-07-14 07:00:29 AM
Some spelling errors, some conversation lines for different people need to be on different lines
And the Hellsing crossover is an excellent addition
Well, Albus wanted a weapon
Looking forward to more
(#) DJ32 2008-07-14 10:13:44 PM
Well I had to look up what Steam Punk was I am glad I did. This fic is a lot of fun if slightly clunky but you said it was unbataed so no big deal keep it up and thanks for writting.
Good chapter. I like the history of the Steam world, and having the older Hermoine take her younger self under her wing is good touch. I hope you show more interaction between Integra and Harry.
Great story even with the switching between worlds that is the only thing I dislike.I would also love to see a story that has the stuff about Harry's family and Wild Hunt used in a story with out the other world stuff.That was great it is like two stories in one.