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• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) axelrajr 2008-07-13

  tons of fun.
  
  if at all possible, i would enjoy it if hellsign showed up some more.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) skytime12 2008-07-13

  i like the saying 'Open the Gates of Hell' it sends chills down your spine. please write more

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) CrimsonRogue 2008-07-14

  I like the story, though I thought it better before the Hellsing crossover. I saw the Crossover in the Genre section, but was hoping that the steam-magic universe was the cross.
  
  Anyway, well done, though slightly clunky. Make sure that you place other sides of conversation in new lines.
  
  "He said"
  "She said"
  "The other guy said"
  
  Like that. Makes for easier reading.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) ficbob 2008-07-14

  Excellent
  Some spelling errors, some conversation lines for different people need to be on different lines
  And the Hellsing crossover is an excellent addition
  Well, Albus wanted a weapon
  Looking forward to more
  Thanks

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) DJ32 2008-07-14

  Well I had to look up what Steam Punk was I am glad I did. This fic is a lot of fun if slightly clunky but you said it was unbataed so no big deal keep it up and thanks for writting.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Blackwolf742003 2008-07-15

  Good chapter. I like the history of the Steam world, and having the older Hermoine take her younger self under her wing is good touch. I hope you show more interaction between Integra and Harry.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) Destroyerdrt 2008-07-24

  Great story even with the switching between worlds that is the only thing I dislike.I would also love to see a story that has the stuff about Harry's family and Wild Hunt used in a story with out the other world stuff.That was great it is like two stories in one.

• Steam Punk Potter

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2009-02-10

  Very good chapter.
  
  gunny

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