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Waiting

by anon 3 Reviews

If ya wanna know what it's about then... READ IT AND REVIEW IT!! WOO!! THANKS GUYS AND GALS!! ps. this story is completely fiction...I'm 13 years old for gods sake!!

Category: Mystery - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2008/07/18 - Updated: 2008/08/07 - 204 words

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  • Waiting

    (#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2008-08-05 09:25:11 AM

    aaaah no I damn near cried when I read this I think I only have one criticism- there's not enough punctuation! Hang on a minute, you know where I live... Hides under bed

    Author's response

    thankyoooo

    i've been wating for a review for aaggggeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!!

    ur 2 are my first (hiphip horaaayyy!)

    mmm...aahh... i dnt mind ur critisism (it's constructive critisism!) so, i wont kill u this time (notice the this time in that sentence)!
  • Waiting

    (#) AllieC 2008-08-27 09:49:26 AM

    omg!! this is so good! it makes your heart sink at the end, b cuz u dont realise that he is dead until the very end1 xxxxxxxxx ;)
  • Waiting

    (#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2009-05-02 01:40:09 AM

    awww, there's something so sad about this it makes your entire face crumple. I rated you 'moving' and added you to my favourites:)

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