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• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) jjracer24 2008-05-24

  This got my attention. I can't really say whether I liked it or not, there wasn't enough to go on but I'm interested in see what else you have in store for this story. I can promise to read your next installment. The faster you update, the faster I can give a proper review.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) jabarber69 2008-05-24

  Hey its short but well written and it grabs you with the mystery of who that guy was, but is it complete cause your profile said it was!?!

  Author's response

  Its not complete and I have absolutely no clue as to how to fix that.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) DJ32 2008-05-24

  Since you said you knew it was short that is fine. But you should have told us what he is even if not who he is. For example is he a Wizard, Vamp, Wolf, Mugggle Etc. I stll think this was a good job for a first time and hope to see more soon thanks for writting. This is just what I think and hope it helps down the road.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) lycus 2008-05-24

  First off that was a short chapter. but damn if it doesn't grab your attention right away. but I hope that this ends up a harry/hermione story. but please update soon I would like to see where this story goes.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) Aelfwine 2008-05-24

  Not bad for a first time, but it's a bit short. It might've been better to wait posting this until you had more to go with it, but it got my attention and I'm curious to see what comes next.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) Cateagle 2008-05-24

  Rather short, but attention-grabbing start to things. You may have to re-upload to get the full chapter to show properly. It's certianly an intriguing and interesting start, esp. with Dumbles musings, and I look forward to seeing the full chapter and then the ones which follow.

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) slashslut 2008-05-24

  definitely grabbed my attention. im curious to see what happens next! read ya later:)

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) LDA 2008-05-24

  If your post wasn't complete don't stress it happens from time to time, you just have to repost the chapter is all, Keep it up though very interesting snippet...

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) drifter 2008-05-25

  I agree with everyone else, Very good for a first timer.
  
  I also agree that I want to see a update soon. A cliffhanger mystery begs
  for more clues than a powerful man that unnerves Dumbledore enough, that he DOESN'T try get to #4 first, to stop him.
  
  And claims Harry is one of his?:
  Grandparent,
  Clan head,
  Head of a group that his parents were part of,
  Harry's an experiment, alien, X-man, etc.
  
  Please, don't keep us hanging to long (puppy dog eyes).
  
  Again, thanks for a good read.
  
  
  May the MUSES always be with you!!!
  ^_^
  

• Harry Potter and the Family History

  (#) Nautilus 2008-05-25

  nothing annoys me more then short chapters, i know you want to create mystery and whatnot, but just like any good author you need to learn to provide some meat to the chapter, before you give us a cliffy. otherwise, try and combine a cliffy chapter, with a scene break where you could have showed what either voldy or the ministry were doing.
  
  please don't take this the wrong way, but chapters like this, show little planning, and little to no skill when it comes to writing...
  
  i hope you the best, i hope you have this planned, and i look forward to seeing you ideas.

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