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Leave This All Behind.
9 ReviewsRyan found something of Elle's.
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You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) infinite-oddity 2008-07-21 06:04:42 PM
I love how this chapter defines the relationship between Elle and Ryan.
And the bra thing? Priceless.
Of course you love Helen, Ryan.
DUH.Author's response
Thank you.
And I'm glad you liked the bra thing. I thought that was rather funny. ^_^
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You Remind Me Of A Former Love.
(#) iluvsmiliez 2008-07-21 06:50:51 PM
Hahaha, I have to agree with Infinite-Oddity, that bra thing was very funny. (: I saw a side of Elle that I thought I'd never see. It was amazing. :) I still feel bad for Helen an for Ryan [I think. :/]
Yes. this was a good chapter. Update soon, meh luff.
-iluvsmiliezAuthor's response
Ah, yes. I was hoping people found the bra thing funny.
And, I wanted to show readers that there was a whole different side of Elle. Not just the sarcastic, tough girl. She actually has feelings and emotions as well. :]
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(#) MrSz-Or3o 2008-07-21 08:20:04 PM
Ohkay...
I loved the twist
We got to see a new side of Elle
and it's kinda like
they hit rock bottom and now the only way to go is up
IDK i just sounded so dumb
.....
i love that Elle and Ryan are at peace now
although it took a black bra to make it happen
LOL
much love
MrSz.Or3oAuthor's response
No, no. You didn't sound dumb at all. We did see a new side of Elle and they are pretty close [if not already there] to rock bottom. :]
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(#) medicatedlives 2008-07-21 08:26:44 PM
That chapter was amazing, insanely funny, and sweet, all rolled into one.
Are Ryan and Helen going to get back together? I really really hope so. -nudges- Anyway, I loved the chapter. (And your speedy updates!) I'm looking forward to the next one.Author's response
Awhe. You are too sweet. :]
I'm glad you liked the chapter and thought it was funny as well as sweet.
Buuuuuuuut, I'm not revealing anything, so, you are just gonna have to wait and see. :]
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(#) rclukins 2008-07-22 08:45:23 AM
In most stories Brendon is the sweet, lovable goofball. But in this story he is nothing but a jerk! ha.
Im glad Elle and Ryan dont hate each other, its weird that Brendon cheated on Ryan with Elle and cheated on Elle with Ryan. "/jerk/"Author's response
Haha,
Yes, Brendon is quite the jerk. And yes, Brendon usually is the adorable, wacky protagonist everyone loves. I wanted to bring something new to the table. :]
Thank you for the review.
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(#) xoconverse 2008-07-22 02:19:42 PM
Wow. Hahaha. I love how Elle is trying to make Ryan miserable for what he did. I have to say, he kind of deserves it. And the bra? bahahahhaa. that was great. And then wow a side of Elle Ive never seen before! I feel bad for her and Ryan,even though Ryan did a horrible thing to Helen.
And yeah Ryan, you love Helen! Go get her!
Great job, as always! :]Author's response
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Ah, yes. The things that Elle made Ryan do was funny for me as well. It's always fun when I write Elle's character. And it was inevitable for her to do something to Ryan for breaking her best friend's heart. :]
The bra thing? Oh yes. This was one of my favorite parts of this chapter as well. How embarrassing that must be. Poor Elle. XD
And yes, I'm glad that I got to show another side of Elle. She's usually sarcastic and tough. It was good to show readers that she can be a little sensitive as well. :]
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(#) eileen162 2008-07-22 08:10:46 PM
RYAN LOVES HELEN!! yayayayayaay/
i mean, i knew, but its good to know its official.
i really really like this chapter, elle and ryan bond nicely.
keep it up !!!!!Author's response
Awhe, I love you. :]
Thank you for the review.
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(#) webba141 2008-07-24 09:51:26 PM
omg, i was ROFL...that was classic trick by ryan, haha.
anyway, i can't think of a smart review so i'm going to say that that was an AWESOME (!) chapter, one of the best i think. i was suprised at elle though, i thought she would literally kill ryan, she has a soft side, awww...hmmm =)
yay, please update soonAuthor's response
Awhe.
Yes, Ryan is a little deviant, isn't he?
One of the best chapters, eh? I don't know about that. But, I'm really glad you thought so. It's one of my favorite chapters as well. :]
And yes, Elle has a soft side. Who would've guessed? XD
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(#) Life_is_42 2008-08-05 05:26:39 PM
i hope this doesn't come off as mean or insensitive towards Elle's position...but it was REALLY nice to see her vulnerable side!! I think Ryan NEEDS Elle's support/alliance before he can set about getting Helen back. which leads me to my next point:
HE FINALLY ADMITTED IT PROPERLY! throws confetti omg FINALLY he realizes he loves HER. Omg. what a dumbass though! (No offense Ry, but it took you long enough XD)
i love this because its sort of....bittersweet humor XD hehe. it was light hearted ENOUGH to break up the sadness of Ry's situation.Author's response
No, no. Not insensitive at all. I wanted to show the vulnerable side to Elle. I mean, she just isn't ALL 'tough-sarcastic-coffee-addict' all the time. I wanted to portray that she had feelings as well. :]
Ah, yes. Ryan is quite the dumb ass. It took him awhile to admit it, but he does in fact love Helen. YAY!
-dances-
Thank you for the review!