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you are born and he is two
6 ReviewsBrotherhood is a beautiful thing. Or not.
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you are born and he is two
(#) tong 2005-05-15 09:14:11 AM
SURPRISE! HI CHRISSIEAuthor's response
I DIDN'T KNOW WE COULD RESPOND TO REVIEWS HERE. O_O
Gahhh, Tongari, thanks so much? Your feedback always makes me like my own stories better, and that is a gift, man. lovessss -
you are born and he is two
(#) Aki 2005-08-08 07:35:21 PM
chrissie, what a bizarre way for me to find your IniD fic. XD you and your incest, girl, although i can't help thinking that ryousuke and takumi would make a better pairing! look at all they have in common--their obsessions, at any rate. but oh, sometimes i don't believe you when you say you don't like writing, because you have such an EAR for phrases sometimes. 2nd person POV, classily done, typical gorgeous characterization and ability to stage scenes in a few sentences--augh, how i envy you your prose. -
you are born and he is two
(#) vaioma 2005-11-14 08:16:10 PM
I always like stories about the Takahashi brothers. Yours was unique in the way you wrote it.
Author\'s Response: Thanks! I love Takahashi-kyoudai, too; it's a shame the fandom's so small, sigh. -
you are born and he is two
(#) lynnmonster 2005-12-26 10:30:10 PM
Mmmph, this really hit me strongly; it's such a vivid picture of influence and perception. Wonderfully done! -
you are born and he is two
(#) bellicosus 2007-05-13 11:29:45 PM
I've just started reading Initial D for the hell of it, but was instantly struck by these two characters. Love the way you laid this out through the number two, and showed so much without having to use dialog.
I actually thought this story was going to go along a slightly different path (I misread the summary), but was pleasantly surprised by the focus on Keisuke.