- I love this story and it's really good to find a Mikey focused one. I do feel a bit sorry for Gerard but it's such an interesting concept you are going for. Loving the angst in this story and i can't wait for more - please say you will do more. Mikey sounds like he's about to totally explode. When you wrote the scene of Mikey going to the locked up room it was heartbreaking.
I promise to review now that i have found this gem.
- Alright, as promised, here is the review.
I loved how Mikey finally stood up to Gerard, even though I think he seriously needs to chat wayyyy more with him. Gerard needs to understand what exactly he's doing to Mikey, because it's clearly affecting his little brother. I can't believe that Gerard would ever do it intentionally, so I really think that Mikey just needs to talk to him about it.
Mikey and Brook's relationship is adorable!! I love how she stays so close to him and makes him feel like he's protecting something and is important to someone - I think that might be a new experience for him.
I'd like to know more about Brooks past...it seems like there's something pretty serious and upsetting going on there, and I feel like it's probably really important for Mikey to know if they're going to succeed as a couple.
Also, if you feel like it, I'd love for Frankie and Kat to have some more scenes...I'm just saying. hehehe
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