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The End Of A Broken Heart.

by XxIceCreamHeadachexX 13 Reviews

The end.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2008/07/28 - Updated: 2008/07/28 - 2051 words - Complete

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  • You Remind Me Of A Former Love.

    (#) Life_is_42 2008-08-05 06:01:57 PM

    He didn't know who she was. He had no clue who this girl that he was watching was as she sat alone in the rain. But, an unusual deja vu submerged into his silenced thoughts as he remembered being that person, with the cynical view of the world and the pain much too hurtful to handle.

    I LOVE how you bring things full circle/paralleled. (haha. Wewt for comparing lines to a circle?)


    But suddenly, as Ryan reached the girl, he lost his breath between his gasping astonishment.

    "Helen?" Ryan asked, looking down to the soaked girl as she raised her head and gave him the most saddest look he has ever seen. There wasn't anger or annoyance. Just the pure sorrow that had been hiding in her heart for so long.


    Some how I FELT it would be Helen….i’m SO happy it is….reads on

    And there you go. Nods Ryan’s finally going to do what Helen would do.

    You know I remember nearish to the beginning of this, me thinking “Helen can’t be like this all the time” and…when she’s not the warmth provider…..well….theres always a ryan now!


    I’m so SAD that this was the last chapter, because it means no more updates, however I am THRILLED to have been able to follow this story along, chapter by chapter, and to finally see it conclude.

    I LOVE the ending!!!! LOVE IT! Dances happily

    I can’t wait to read more from you too!!

    And you are so sweet to give me a shout out, despite my lack of internet connectivity/reviews (I hope I’ve made up for that?). I LOVE YOU!!!! You’re like one of my favorite people ever! dances more

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

    Lifey
  • You Remind Me Of A Former Love.

    (#) Life_is_42 2008-08-05 06:01:59 PM

    He didn't know who she was. He had no clue who this girl that he was watching was as she sat alone in the rain. But, an unusual deja vu submerged into his silenced thoughts as he remembered being that person, with the cynical view of the world and the pain much too hurtful to handle.

    I LOVE how you bring things full circle/paralleled. (haha. Wewt for comparing lines to a circle?)


    But suddenly, as Ryan reached the girl, he lost his breath between his gasping astonishment.

    "Helen?" Ryan asked, looking down to the soaked girl as she raised her head and gave him the most saddest look he has ever seen. There wasn't anger or annoyance. Just the pure sorrow that had been hiding in her heart for so long.


    Some how I FELT it would be Helen….i’m SO happy it is….reads on

    And there you go. Nods Ryan’s finally going to do what Helen would do.

    You know I remember nearish to the beginning of this, me thinking “Helen can’t be like this all the time” and…when she’s not the warmth provider…..well….theres always a ryan now!


    I’m so SAD that this was the last chapter, because it means no more updates, however I am THRILLED to have been able to follow this story along, chapter by chapter, and to finally see it conclude.

    I LOVE the ending!!!! LOVE IT! Dances happily

    I can’t wait to read more from you too!!

    And you are so sweet to give me a shout out, despite my lack of internet connectivity/reviews (I hope I’ve made up for that?). I LOVE YOU!!!! You’re like one of my favorite people ever! dances more

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

    Lifey
  • You Remind Me Of A Former Love.

    (#) CantFindTheWay 2011-10-22 12:14:10 AM

    I LOVE THE STORY, I just read it today, and it's awesome! You should keep writing! I hope to see more of your work! :)

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