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The Clown.

by Bricougalle_Bug 1 Reviews

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Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2008/07/31 - Updated: 2008/08/07 - 90 words - Complete

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  • The Clown.

    (#) plainwhitetank 2008-08-11 05:28:44 AM

    i like this! my only constructive criticism: maybe the first bit should be less punctuated so when you get to the bit,
    "the anger. the rage."
    the punchiness becomes more emphasised. just a thought.
    keep it up!
    -E

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