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B.D.P.D.

by Isebas 15 Reviews

Ten year old Harry Potter's destiny is changed when he is contacted by a secret government organization before he gets his Hogwart's letter. Strong!Intelligent!Gray!Werewolf!Harry.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Crossover,Fantasy - Characters: Harry,Tonks - Warnings: [!] [V] [X] [?] - Published: 2008/08/09 - Updated: 2008/08/09 - 869 words

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  • B.D.P.D.

    (#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13 04:20:42 PM

    Nice, be careful though so that you don't end up with God-mode Harry. I admit it, it's fun when he kills Voldie, resurrect him and kill him again just for the heck of it, but only in one-shots or crack-fics...
  • B.D.P.D.

    (#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13 04:38:41 PM

    Nice, I hope you'll continue this. Although I agree, it was much to short to count as a real chapter: you'll probably need flashbacks to flesh out his "path to power" a bit more than that. The Remus-reference has already been pointed out: fix it!
    Otherwise, keep up the good work.
  • B.D.P.D.

    (#) silverthescribe 2010-07-03 02:10:08 PM

    Finish this story please
  • B.D.P.D.

    (#) lowprofile 2010-07-03 03:46:41 PM

    your serious?!!??!?!!? why is it that a really good story allways has some author that can't be bothered to update it?!!?!!?!
  • B.D.P.D.

    (#) kingblack 2010-10-03 10:51:12 AM

    Pretty good. Might wanna lengthen it and give a more detailed explanation of Harry's life up until, during, and after he discovered his magic. And get rid of the Remus thing. Other than that, please continue.

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