Ten year old Harry Potter's destiny is changed when he is contacted by a secret government organization before he gets his Hogwart's letter. Strong!Intelligent!Gray!Werewolf!Harry.
(#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13 04:20:42 PM
Nice, be careful though so that you don't end up with God-mode Harry. I admit it, it's fun when he kills Voldie, resurrect him and kill him again just for the heck of it, but only in one-shots or crack-fics...
(#) Lord_Sia 2009-01-13 04:38:41 PM
Nice, I hope you'll continue this. Although I agree, it was much to short to count as a real chapter: you'll probably need flashbacks to flesh out his "path to power" a bit more than that. The Remus-reference has already been pointed out: fix it!
Otherwise, keep up the good work.
(#) lowprofile 2010-07-03 03:46:41 PM
your serious?!!??!?!!? why is it that a really good story allways has some author that can't be bothered to update it?!!?!!?!
(#) kingblack 2010-10-03 10:51:12 AM
Pretty good. Might wanna lengthen it and give a more detailed explanation of Harry's life up until, during, and after he discovered his magic. And get rid of the Remus thing. Other than that, please continue.