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• You Stole My Breath

  (#) medicatedlives 2008-08-12

  -sigh- Thank god she didn't go through with it.
  
  I loved this =) More soon pwease?

  Author's response

  I'm glad you liked this chapter. I just have to put a few last touches on the next chapter and you'll be able to read that one too. :D

• You Stole My Breath

  (#) Life_is_42 2008-08-12

  oh i'm glad she didn't do it. now there WILL be jonbabies xD
  oo boy or girl do you think?
  and we see brendon again! yay! always nice to see him poking around...but speaking of him, what was he doing with Regina? hmm?
  
  i love these boys so much sighs awesome people, awesome writer, awesome story!!!
  
  
  

  Author's response

  boy or girl, i haven't decided yet. I keep deciding on one and then changing my mind. Good thing I've got some time to figure it out. As for Regina and Brendon, I guess she can't spend all her time in Vegas...especially when the panic boys have a bit of business to attend to in LA.
  
  you forgot one...awesome readers!

• You Stole My Breath

  (#) falloutbaby89 2008-08-12

  Fact: One of the best fanfictions ever. I love this story, and I love your writing. You have a unique flow and your own style which is something you hardly read. I appreciate it. And having Mr Jon Walker in it is a bigger bonus. I check everyday to see if you updated. That's how obsessed I am. Lol. Update real soon please. I'm so happy she didnt do it. Now the other hard part is finding Jon and confronting him.

  Author's response

  FACT: This story would be nothing without my readers. Everyone reading is absolutely amazing! I really can't thank you enough for all the kind things you've said. It really means the world to me. It really keeps me motivated to keep writing even when it doesn't turn out like I expected. With Brendon and Regina dating, I don't think it'll be that hard to find Jon after all. You'll see what I mean in chapter seven.

• You Stole My Breath

  (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-08-13

  Oh God.
  Oh God.
  Oh God.
  
  -blinks-
  
  I...
  
  Um...
  
  ACKK!
  
  -speechless-
  
  Holy crap! This was just too breathtaking to describe. I mean, with the protesters, the nurse, the clinic, everything was so.... Real. It was as though I was sitting there, right next to Cassia, just awaiting this fate.
  
  This has to be one of my favorite chapters, I swear. It was written in perfection. Gahh, how do you do it? You just totally blow my mind!
  
  And I'm glad she didn't go through with it, but somewhat in the middle of this chapter, I kind of figured that she was there for an abortion. My heart was just racing, my fingers trembling, not knowing if she were to actually go through with it. Oh man, you are just so awesome.
  
  And I know this is slightly off-topic, buuuuuut-- I love your summaries. With the whole 'FACT' things. It's just really cool.
  
  -shrugs-
  
  I don't know. You are just like a really amazing author. I mean, even you put your summaries saying, "EAT DONKEY, BIZNATCH!" I would somehow still think it's great. Of course, there wouldn't be any explainable reason for you to put "Eat donkey, biznatch" anyway...
  O.o
  
  Okay, now I'm just rambling. Well, marvelous chapter. I certainly enjoyed it. :]
  
  Update soon! :]
  
  
  
  

  Author's response

  I was told in the one and only creative writing class I ever took to "show" not "tell", so yours is one of the best compliments I can receive. Seeing as I'm not especially funny, I think the big draw of my writing is setting a realistic scene. You make me feel as though I've succeeded. I highly doubt there will be any donkey's in this sorry, unfortunately. haha. (see what I mean about not being funny) Anyway. New chapter soon.

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