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Getting a Clue

after a hard day Harry blurts out a question then realises he had no idea

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Published: 2008/08/15 - Updated: 2008/08/16 - 3766 words - Complete

Reviews

• Getting a Clue

  (#) Anonymus31 2008-08-15 07:55:58 AM

  It was interesting. you've got an excellent mind for humor, you might want to add that to the genre's list.
  
  There were a few spelling and grammar issues, but not enough to make it unreadable.
  
  So is this just a oneshot, or will there be more chapters forthcoming? Either way it was enjoyable

  Author's response

  this one was a oneshot
  the idea was to work out some kinks in my writing style as i work on 3 other pieces.
  
  one of the other pieces im working on is posted here and is yet another exercise in a different writing style
  the other two are not posted yet and are both being planned out in my normal style one is a HP fic and the other is original
  
  the spelling is likely all screwed up because in neither American or British but spent equal parts of my younger years in Australia, the USA and the UK add to that a nasty case of Dyslexia and you get a really screwed up spelling ethos and vocab not to mention a SOH that is far to bizarre for words
  
  anywho thanks for the comment

• Getting a Clue

  (#) thealphamale 2008-08-16 12:45:19 PM

  A well done oneshot, even with the errors. A good combination of witty humor and romance. Nice job!

  Author's response

  thanks for your comment

• Getting a Clue

  (#) issabissa 2008-08-28 12:29:55 PM

  Awa!!!! A sweet story indeed!!!!! You did a fabulous job!!! I really liked it!

• Getting a Clue

  (#) Dragen 2008-08-29 04:18:54 AM

  Not a bad story mate, I like Hermione thoughts but Harry's eyes. Nice. I like Harry's and Hermione's thoughts for each other... cool.
  
  I like what their friends were goint to do to get them to see the light, as they put it. I like how Harry just asked Hermmione to Marry him like that. And how Harry reacted to when she said yes, nice done there mate, I like it.

• Getting a Clue

  (#) Mionefan 2008-11-04 09:04:23 AM

  Pretty funny. It's a keeper.

  Author's response

  thanks for that.
  
  i have a plan to write a more serious story eventually and i will soon get back to my other story as soon as life stopes dicking me about

• Getting a Clue

  (#) Cateagle 2010-09-13 09:47:01 PM

  Heh, that was a fun story. I have to admit, the ending clearly illustrates just how powerful Harry is as his subconcious controls the transformation while his conscious mind is occupied with Hermione. A very nicely done story.

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