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R.S.V.P.

Captain Jack Sparrow reflects on the one party he didn't dare crash - the wedding of Elizabeth and Will. One shot.

Category: Pirates of the Caribbean - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters: Gibbs, Jack - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/03/03 - Updated: 2006/03/04 - 1251 words - Complete

Reviews

• R.S.V.P.

  (#) Michelle 2006-03-18 07:23:48 AM

  Very nice. The nuances of Jack's thoughts and where they tend to lead were very fascinating, yet subtle! No sledgehammer anywhere:)

• R.S.V.P.

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-04-05 05:51:39 PM

  I don't recall Captain Sparrow ever calling her "Lizzie."
  
  "and the odd dagger tossed up in a fit of boredom."
  
  I seem to remember Fox Mulder spearing the cieling with sharpened pencils. Another dark hero figure who'd been left out in the sun -- or radiation of some kind -- far too long.
  
  Periods and commas go before the quotes.
  
  Heh heh! Great diction and nice use of running gag with "not a eunuch." It does get a bit repetitive around the last third or so.

• R.S.V.P.

  (#) Dancingkatz 2006-07-27 01:04:36 PM

  Nice character work. And the ending is great!

• R.S.V.P.

  (#) Slinky 2006-08-31 06:29:59 AM

  Great work!

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