Kaitlynn and Aubrey, they don't try to but they only make it worst.
- Aww, thank you, I feel so special! I could do cartwheels or something! Only, I don't know how too. And haha, I'm sure I'm not the only person from Jersey, but I agree. We are cool. =D
Anyway, great update. You missed some capitalizations, and you didn't remember to put the apostrophe after the n (like in hadn't), but overall, this chapter was okay.
Update soon, I wanna know what her friends are gonna say about Gerard.