Chaos theory; a nargle flaps its wings in China, and Luna responds differently to Harry during their conversation before the leaving feast.. AU starting near the end of OoTP. Harry/Luna/Hermione. N...
(#) DrT 2008-08-23 02:51:26 AM
Good chapter -- it doesn't answer much and builds anticipation for more!
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-08-23 03:45:22 AM
Nice paret, and looks like things are getting built up for the next part, as Minerva(or is it her really?) is having more uncomfortable moments, and Harry is reminded of his past also. Going to look forward to what happens next time.
(#) issabissa 2008-08-23 08:29:26 AM
Awa!!! What a cute and wonderful story!!!!! Very original plot!! keep up the great work!!!
(#) dennisud 2008-08-23 08:52:42 AM
I like tha pacing of the story, the gradual awareness Hermione has for Harry, and how Luna's seeing this and slowly apprasing it.
Love how Snape's reaction rattled them and I think Harry's past (In the cubbord and otherwise) will draw the three together in the coming conflict and the life beyond!
(#) slashslut 2008-08-23 12:31:10 PM
good chapter but the building suspense and lack of answers is killing me! which is i suppose the point and has been done very skillfully!
awwww... that was cute at the end. I want to know what's in the box. Poor Harry keeps getting picked on, doesn't he?
(#) Wolfric 2008-08-23 04:54:18 PM
I am enjoying your story. I think dinner with Albus might be quite illuminating. Thanks for writing. W.
(#) AnnF 2008-08-23 10:56:03 PM
(#) Vanir 2008-08-24 09:15:45 AM
The ending was insanely cute, the plotting and scheming interesting, but the best part to my mind was McGonagall's protest. Just because it paid off, it's still a violation to take such a precaution without consent. I'm staying tuned...
(#) Bobboky 2008-08-25 09:54:02 AM
Very Very good... I need to add more otherwise they will charge me $3000 dollars in small unmarked non-sequential bills....