(#) Shadowbutterfly 2008-12-02 07:37:24 AMIt was good, you could have done a lot more with this story. I liked it, but I found it to be a bit rushed.
For instance, Berri and Ringo's death. Their Mew Mews, so they shouldn't be able to die that easily. Blinded yes, but not dead just like that.
So, just letting you know, keep up the good work. :D