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The First Time
0 ReviewsIt's a poem about rejection, I've rated it PG to be on the safe side. Please R&R
Ok, I found this lurking in the poetry section of my folder. I hope you enjoy it and please please review looks at readers with a puppy dog look
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The first time.
Rejection.
That feeling of
Unwantedness
That feeling of
Pain
That feeling of remorse
That refuses to
Let go
Rejection
The hardest thing to bear
That unloved feeling
Of pain
And despair
Could I have done more?
The days
Slip by
And I
Still
Think of you
Never again
This lesson has
Been learnt
Never again.
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I hope you liked it, it was one of the first I've written and it's just been rediscovered in the back of my folder. How that happened will remain a mystery to me. Anyway, review please!
Nooka
________________________________________
The first time.
Rejection.
That feeling of
Unwantedness
That feeling of
Pain
That feeling of remorse
That refuses to
Let go
Rejection
The hardest thing to bear
That unloved feeling
Of pain
And despair
Could I have done more?
The days
Slip by
And I
Still
Think of you
Never again
This lesson has
Been learnt
Never again.
________________________________________
I hope you liked it, it was one of the first I've written and it's just been rediscovered in the back of my folder. How that happened will remain a mystery to me. Anyway, review please!
Nooka
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