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Forever

by BlackAngelChick 1 Reviews

Sometimes even the strongest heart will fade....

Category: Kingdom Hearts - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters: Kairi,Riku,Sora - Published: 2008/09/03 - Updated: 2008/09/03 - 875 words - Complete

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  • Forever

    (#) helluin 2008-12-03 01:28:25 PM

    Sad and beautiful, heartfelt. The line about the heavens failing to cheer him up is a nice touch. I'm not sure if this was your intention, but by avoiding names early in the story, you led me to believe the grave was Sora's for several paragraphs. That ambiguity fits their bond.

    Typo alert: "barley" should be "barely".

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