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Fourteen

by XxkelseyxX 3 Reviews

please review if you want to see more i'm so unmotivated right now.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Published: 2008/09/05 - Updated: 2008/09/06 - 1246 words

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  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) kitkatpwl 2008-09-05 09:16:36 PM

    Did you re-post this because I SWEAR that I already read and reviewed!

    Either way, here's another :)

    So...Mikey's out, still not talking to Gerard, leaving Brooklyn behind and lying to get rid of Frank and Kat. He's off to a wonderful start.

    He really needs to get over himself. I love Mikes, I really do, but he's being just a tinsy bit overdramatic where Gerard is concerned. He's so convinced that Gee is the one who is so self absorbed and yet Mikey is unwilling to hear out his own brother because HE doesn't want to? Grow up! Face the music Mikey - you can't ignore him for the rest of your life! Not only is he your brother, but also your bandmate!

    While I don't like the "fighting" between Brook and Mikey (I realize that it's not actually fighting yet, just tension, but bear with me. hehe) I think that it really added some realism into the story. I like how they're each kind of pining for each other now that they're away too though. It's realistic for such a new relationship.

    I liked that Kat was in this one too. I always smile when she's in one of the chapters. It makes me happy. hehe

    Now, lets talk about that bottle - what the hell does he plan to do with that ?!?!? Did he and Brook get rid of all of them? What is his problem?! Does he want to ruin everything? You had better not fucking drink that Mikey or so help me I will come through this computer screen and kick your ass!
    Having said that, I again appreciate the realism. Chances are temptation is going to exist - especially with all of the added pressures, although I do think a couple of those pressures are self induced.

    Great chapter! Love the story!

    Cheers
    Kat

    Author's response

    Have I ever told you how much I love you? LOL

    seriously these reviews are lovely

    TWO THINGS
    1. Yes I did repost because ficwad is messed. I didn't get any emails, and I thought no one reviewed this, and when I looked at it on the site, it also said there were zero reviews. gay, I know.

    2. He got it from the hospital when they returned all the things spencer confiscated from him when he first arrived, just in case anyone else is wondering.
  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-09-05 10:33:39 PM

    NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

    MIKEY!!! Don't do it!!! Please update soon, this is an awesome story, and I love how you make the chapters so suspenseful...there are so many cliffies!!! :P


  • You Can Cry All You Want to...

    (#) alice93 2008-09-06 05:58:45 AM

    Mikey needs to not drink-for Brooklyn. I would have thought he could have stayed sober for more then five minutes, if not for himself the for Brooklyn.
    What he said to Gerard was so damn mean. And then just watching him cry like that? Cold-hearted much? It kinda proves that he's still and alcoholic though, a sober person would probably not treat someone they loved like that, or a sober Mikey wouldn't. If he was really completely sober, he wouldn't be mad at Gee anymore and Gee should realise that. I hope someone stops him from drinking! Maybe Brooke will ring again?!
    Awesome. Update soon.
    Alice.

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