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The Baby Blues

It was some kind of sick joke on God’s behalf, he was sure of that. Tim Shepard a father? ONESHOT.

Category: Outsiders - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/09/09 - Updated: 2008/09/09 - 1350 words - Complete

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• The Baby Blues

  (#) Perusal 2008-11-15 01:07:56 PM

  I thought that this fic was an amazing read that truly stuck to (what we all believe would be) Tim Shepard's character. However, I did see a few typos here and there (you're probably going to think that I'm being really bitchy):
  
  "He sounded just like his mother."
  It should be "she", right?
  
  "-taking to strangers and showing off pictures of his daughter-"
  
  You skipped out on the "l".
  
  Besides my annoying nitpicks, I hope you appreciate the review! Great story!
  
  

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