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The Bucket List
5 ReviewsKari is terminally ill, sad fanfic about her reaching for her dream (better than it sounds I promise)
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The Bucket List
(#) lostmymindxx45 2008-09-09 01:02:59 PM
Oooo Sounds interesting. You should totally go on!!!
xo
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Thank you :)
I shall carry on
Add me to your alerts ;)
Dondon x -
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(#) dtng101 2008-09-09 02:44:09 PM
I agree
xD.
Haha I berly found out it has one of my nicknames cool.
xP.
more soon
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Cool, and thanks for the review :)
I will carry on
Dondon x -
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(#) Hoodiegirl86 2008-09-09 05:19:58 PM
PWNAGE LUV IT :)Author's response
Why thank you :D -
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(#) Julianne 2008-09-10 03:43:19 PM
Bleh. Interesting idea, but the writing could see some improvement.
It doesn't quite seem to 'flow'. Chances are, you're either trying too hard or not enough. I'm inclined to think the latter.
Watch punctuation and vocabulary- try to use some interesting words. Throw in a good adjective or adverb from time to time. Better yet, use them regularly. Modifiers are an author's best friends.Author's response
Ermmm, thanks?
It's not like I want a perfect story, just something people enjoy reading.
But I will consider what you said anyway. -
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(#) Moonshyne 2008-09-14 04:39:23 AM
Hi Dondon,
I'm a little slow!!
I love the premise of this. Looking forward to reading more.Author's response
Hi!
Its fine, I was so excited when I got your review. I was like yey Moonshyne is reading!
This is a little side story while Im working on my other one
Thanks for your review :)
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