- Oh my, great story. Me and my sister are reading this at the same time and we are thrilled.
Please stop it with the '''oh-my-fucking-god''', cause it's driving me nuts...it's not good to my ears.
Author's responsethanks :)
yeah, i realised the swearing could be excessive...i looked through the story though, and figured out that it becomes instrumental to characters, showing their changes and what-not. so, I'll take on board what you say, but please don't be offended with the swearing in the next few chapters, cos it actually affects plot lines and characters :P
thanks for reading and reviewing!
(#) PrayerOfTheRefugee 2008-09-13OMG YOU CAN'T LEAVE US WITH A CLIFF HANGER LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!
You gotta post more or i will hunt you down and kick your arse in. not really but please post more soon! =D
I've gotta do the final editing on the next chapter, it'll be up soon!
(#) RippedIntoPieces 2008-09-14HELL YES IT IS WORTH CONTINUING!
This is brilliant, you write incredibly well, and finally people are writing with description.
I can't wait till you update!
And chapter 3 was genius...
Author's responsethanks, that makes me feel so happy! i can't stop with description, sometimes i go waaay overboard!
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