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I was working on a certian idea..i made to about the same thing and this was the first idea...review and tell me which one you like...the other one is called no one.
“I love you too baby.”
“I better go before my dad has a fit.” I give him one more kiss.
“Wait I have something want to tell you.”
I jump out.
“Amen.” the minister says.
I lay a red rose on the casket.
“From what he lived it was good.” his mother says,
Putting a hand on my shoulder.
I take off.
Tears streaming down my face.
Clouding my vision.
I slowly walk to the accident scene.
Were the drunk driver to away
The love of my life.
I never got to tell you how much I love you.
I can’t live without you.
So I wont.
I lay in the bath tub
I’ve tried to o.d.,
But it didn’t work.
I tried to drown myself
Obviously it didn’t work because I’m still here.
I’ve decided to shoot my self.
I just wanted to say a few things before I go.
Things I never got to tell you sweetie,
I’m sorry I didn’t stay when you had something to tell me,
Stupid dad, I hate you.
It’s his fault your not here.
I thought we would have the rest of our lives together.
But we don’t.
Now I lay here to take my life.
I have just one more to say.
I love you.
I take one last breath
Put the cold barrel to my temple
Put my finger on the trigger and pull
I’ve just ended my life.