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Cold Love

Not really one, but after an acsident while fighing the aliens...things get surious. Will update in 5 reveiws. PLEASE RIVIEW. :No knees: PLEASE!

Category: Tokyo Mew Mew - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  Zakuro Fujiwara, Ichigo Momomiya, Keiichiro Akasaka, Kisshu, Masaya Aoyama, Masha, Minto Aizawa, Pai, Purin Fon, Retasu Midorikawa, Ryou Shirogane, Taruto - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/03/07 - Updated: 2006/03/08 - 1760 words

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  (#) Pange 2006-03-08 08:49:55 PM

  Ah, what a fun story so far! I'm really interested in what's happening with the Mew Mews, especially with the Lettuce X Ryou undertones. [I love that coupling, yay! ^_^]
  
  I did notice a few errors like these:
  
  - "Retasu walked a bit faster to *walked* with"
  - "She's not gonna like waking up with *wired* people around her"
  
  But despite the tiny errors, the story has been a great read so far! [I have to admit: I was originally scared off because of the many spelling errors in your story's discription. ^^;; hehe] I hope you'll continue soon! =D I'm excited to find out what's going to happen next.

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  (#) Cypher DS 2006-03-11 12:19:54 AM

  Hey, hey! This is something new in a TMM fic. I admired your battle scene - detailed, but without sparing any clarity. Zakuro, Lettuce and Pai get the spotlights here, and they're all nicely characterized. Neat interpretation of Pai as completely apathetic about their one-sided battles.

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  (#) Cypher DS 2006-04-29 08:23:28 AM

  If it's reviews you're after, then you'd better sign up an account at fanfiction-dot-net. If you still plan to finish this, I'll be around to read it.

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  (#) Cherryl 2006-08-08 01:24:59 PM

  It was very good so please keep up the good work

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  (#) Cherryl 2006-08-09 05:13:56 AM

  love then ( love it ) please write more

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  (#) Cherryl 2006-08-09 05:16:36 AM

  Please write who the couples is

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  (#) hiro15 2006-08-16 02:00:42 PM

  it was great! please hurry and write more!! i'm dieing to know comes next!!!!!

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  (#) Cherryl 2006-08-22 08:13:46 AM

  I love the story. My fav Couple Is Ryou And Retasu please I hope they Will be a couple

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  (#) Akari 2006-09-03 11:10:53 PM

  this was awesome! plz plz continue?!

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  (#) Cherryl 2006-09-10 10:56:52 AM

  please please write again. Please please´update update

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