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Chaos theory; a nargle flaps its wings in China, and Luna responds differently to Harry during their conversation before the leaving feast.. AU starting near the end of OoTP. Harry/Luna/Hermione. N...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione,Luna - Warnings: [!!] [?] - Published: 2008/10/05 - Updated: 2008/10/05 - 7103 words

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  (#) DrT 2008-10-05 03:31:07 AM

  Well, the triangle is slowly moving towards a romantic trio, so that's good. I'm surprised Molly left go of her scolding so easily (but am glad she did). Hopefully we'll learn more about Draco and the Potter will in the next chapter!

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  (#) rickoshay 2008-10-05 03:53:16 AM

  Hernione is finaly realizing her true feelings ,it is going to get intresting going with this plot.

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  (#) hordac85 2008-10-05 04:22:05 AM

  Excellent.Keep it up.

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  (#) Bobboky 2008-10-05 06:14:51 AM

  Interestin yes, Interesting

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  (#) dennisud 2008-10-05 08:53:37 AM

  Though the pacing is good, it is a times excurtiating! Luna will be the key to this and Harry will slowly realize he loves both girls equally though differently. As for Susan and also Tonks, though they could be added later, their caring for Harry can be familiar but not intimate.
  
  Also saving Madam Bones IMHO was a brilliant idea. Her death in te canon IMHO took away a key playewr who could have made things more exiting later on.
  
  Finally please don't take too long in getting the new 'Trio' together. Also IMHO Tonks and Remus aren't as compatible as say;
  
  Tonks/Charlie&or One of the Weasley twins
  
  
  and
  
  Remus/Narcissa!
  
  laters!
  
  dennisud
  
  P.S.- BTW great omake at the forums!
  

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  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-10-05 10:30:02 AM

  Liked how this all turned out with the group there. Wonderful to see Narcissa finally shake a bit of sense into Draco, though he honestly needs more imo. Goin to be curious to see what her final decision will be. Also sweet to see that moment with Susan and Harry, and then another one with Hermione whos is finally realizing her feelings along with Harry, and going to be curious to see what the lynch pin that is Luna will be able to do.

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  (#) animemonster 2008-10-05 10:39:01 AM

  lol I was reading this chapter with my friend nearby and she was like "Dear I ask?" and I tried to explain why I was nearly peeing my pants laughing...

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  (#) Wolfric 2008-10-05 11:05:36 AM

  Good chapter. You really are stretching out the revelations of the will reading. My impression is that most death eater actions take place under cover of night but that is just an impression. So does Lord Potter-Black get a couple of seats on the Wizongamot? If he does how can he best annoy Albus? It was good thinking by Harry to have Kreacher move the portrait to his quarters but it does allow her and Kreacher to plot in secret. Thanks for writing. W.

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  (#) issabissa 2008-10-05 02:09:18 PM

  Awa!!! What a nice chapter!!! Keep up the great work!! Look forward to more!

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  (#) DavidMPotter 2008-10-05 02:12:44 PM

  Introducing the idea of Lady Black and Lady Potter with the twins was brilliant.

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