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The shield ( Uchiha Aria)

by Dark-Black-Dragon 1 review

This story is base on Naruto it has a twist Sasuke wasnt the only one to live his family's and clan muder Aria Uchiha is Sasuke's cousin that he thought was dead. when he asks Aria about her past s...

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Gaara - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2008-09-08 - Updated: 2008-09-18 - 1563 words

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The shield ( Uchiha Aria)

(#) Mairead 2008-11-10

You're a good writer! You do need some work with your commas, though. I would do some reading on how to use them, and maybe talk to your English teacher if you're in school.

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