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wish to see them
2 reviewsThe origional story from almost the very beggining,but this time a new guy joins the sceene,but this guy came from the real world to the world of ninjas where he makes friendships and mabye some ro...
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wish to see them
(#) Mairead 2008-11-18
Ok, this is a review I use a lot, but... Punctuation and capitalization need some work. Really, a lot more people will read your fic if you put some time into it! If you need some help, there are plenty of people to ask.Author's response
Well I thank you for your review so I switched from word pad to microsft word witch fixes mistakes this will make it better trust me well please cintinue to read and thanks for the infowish to see them
(#) Glow_ 2009-03-25
yeah. punctuation and capitalization DO need a lot of work, but I like the actual story.
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