Harry goes on a rant. Tonk is there to put him in his place.
- Good is this is not a 'Honks' story, cliche if it is
Author's responseno a Honks. I am pairing him with Hermione.
I love that you have read my story. You are one of the most creative people on here. I would love more of your critiques on this story.
- I like the Harry and Tonks interaction. She's a bit motherly and sisterly at the same time while still maintaining her unique sexiness.
However, it needs a little editting. There were many instances where there were missing "a" "the" and other words.