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Hell Hath No Fury Like a Tonks Scorned

by Coolone007 4 Reviews

Harry goes on a rant. Tonk is there to put him in his place.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Dumbledore,Harry,Lupin,Tonks - Warnings: [!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2008/10/12 - Updated: 2008/10/13 - 3392 words

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  • Not So Sweet Sisxteen

    (#) Cateagle 2008-10-12 09:14:50 PM

    You might want to reload this, this chapter appears to end abruptly in mid-sentence.

    Author's response

    I got it reloaded I would hope you are still reading.
  • Not So Sweet Sisxteen

    (#) dougal74 2008-10-13 02:10:37 AM

    A good chapter, I look forward to reading the next.
  • Not So Sweet Sisxteen

    (#) DrT 2008-10-13 03:37:53 AM

    Good is this is not a 'Honks' story, cliche if it is

    Author's response

    no a Honks. I am pairing him with Hermione.

    I love that you have read my story. You are one of the most creative people on here. I would love more of your critiques on this story.
  • Not So Sweet Sisxteen

    (#) wyrdradio 2008-12-08 12:06:42 PM

    I like the Harry and Tonks interaction. She's a bit motherly and sisterly at the same time while still maintaining her unique sexiness.

    However, it needs a little editting. There were many instances where there were missing "a" "the" and other words.

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