"For our entire relationship, I was so sure that I knew what made you tick. It’s only now that you're gone that I realize that I knew nothing about you." (Bert/Gerard) (Tragedy)
(#) ThreeCheersForMCR_x 2008-10-31 09:49:12 AMI liked this. I liked it a lot.
It was quite insightful. I like it when people write fics that are realistic or have general knowledge to reality. Just little things you included in here made it all seem real.
And of course, it was horribly tragic. I mean, the one part that thankfully has no connection to reality is the part where Bert commits suicide.
Anyways,I love GeeBee fics. So yeah, I pretty much loved it. :)
Author's responseAw thank you so much, it means a lot. To be a hardass, I could try and say that I don't care what anyone thinks about what I write, but duh, it really makes a different when someone says they like it. So thank you! I'm glad that it appealed to your tastes.
I wanted to keep it realistic in terms of the small interjections such as Gerard's assumptions of Bert's home life. It's not like it never existed, you know? So I wanted to make a point to show that these were two "real" people (at least in fiction) that had real lives that were subjected to eventual tragedy.
I promise that I'll have more Bert/Gee fics up soon! Keep checking back and I promise you won't be disappointed.
(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-10-31 10:30:12 AMwow, this was pretty amazing. You told it very well and it seemed very real :] The ending made my stomach feel hollow - which is a good thing because it means you made the whole thing intense with one simple line :]
I loved it, great fic ^^
Author's responseYay I'm so glad that you got an emotional response from this! It makes me feel good, knowing that I was able to get you attached and then sever it so quickly with just eight-hundred or so words! Thanks so much for your review. Keep checking back and I promise there will be more.