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Genius

by Lyanvis 4 Reviews

Brown hair frames that pretty face, green eyes, all lies searing into your soul. She's a heart stealer, a man eater, and she's coming for you.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2008/10/31 - Updated: 2008/10/31 - 397 words - Complete

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  • Genius

    (#) Bricougalle_Bug 2008-11-01 12:20:49 PM

    Sounds like a good song :]
  • Genius

    (#) CrimsonFlowers 2008-11-01 07:04:10 PM

    I liked it.
    Good song lyrics.
    I liked the word choice :]

    Xox,
    CrimsonFlowers
  • Genius

    (#) BlackAngelChick 2008-11-08 10:29:26 PM

    That would make a really good song!
    It was so sad.... the emotion was so strong too!
  • Genius

    (#) izziebella 2009-01-15 05:16:12 PM

    I think that this i a really good song with really good emothion. I've been reading your writing and you are very good with figurative language and descriptions. Keep it up!

    Izzzibee

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