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Chapter 010: Heart I Call Home
3 Reviews(Final) Chapter 010
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(#) punkchic 2006-04-29 07:14:54 AM
I loved ur story just as i love frank (which is a lot hehe) ur story made me cry very good jobAuthor's response
That means a lot to me. I'm happy it made you feel the emotions that you did. :) -
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(#) charlotte 2006-05-05 12:01:21 PM
an amazing story
it actually made me cry at the end!Author's response
Why, thank you! There's a sequel called Take Back This Goodbye which has just recently wrapped. I hope you'll read it. :) -
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(#) ZOE 2006-05-18 07:24:50 AM
YOU CAN'T JUST END THE STORY THERE I WANT THEM TO GET BACK TOGETHER
IT MAKES ME CRY KNOWING THEY DIDN'T GET BACK TOGETHER
YOU BROKE MY HEART NOW THAT YOU HAVE ENDED THE STORY =(Author's response
Well, dry your eyes, because there's a sequel. It's called "Take Back This Goodbye". I hope it'll bandage your heart back into one. :) -
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(#) shellyisnothere 2006-05-28 04:23:46 PM
I guess all stories don't have good endings... I really did like your story but that ending is really sad...Author's response
Thanks for reviewing... it has a sequel named "Take Back This Goodbye" if you're up to reading that. :) It's kinda sad too... -
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(#) kate 2006-07-08 01:41:52 PM
that was really good. i had some laughs and a lot of awww's. you kept me interested.
i look forward to reading more of you're workAuthor's response
Well, I hope you continue on to read "Take Back This Goodbye" as it is the sequel. :) Thanks! -
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(#) Pols 2006-09-29 04:53:43 AM
Excellent story!! Off to read the follow on.
I would be devestatedly upset at this ending if i didn't know there was a sequel and so i still have hope for Frank and MinaAuthor's response
Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the sequel as much as this one. When I went on a hiatus after this first part, people went a bit nutty. :) -
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(#) Alison 2006-10-24 10:29:43 PM
I wont give you hate mail! because i liked how you ended it...it was really good it was the way it was supposed to end even though they made a cute couple this worked out better, poor pete! but i ilke how you added all those bands the used, and FOB and stuff your a really good writer keep up the good work!Author's response
Thank you! Did you read the sequel, Take Back This Goodbye? -
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(#) dazed and confused 2006-11-17 03:57:19 PM
okay..so..
I absolutely love this story..a ton.
but,why not keep going??
I mean..its really good.
but..You did end it quite well.
I would love more..but..if thats all.
Very nice job...:))Author's response
But there's a sequel! Take Back This Goodbye, I hope you read it. :) -
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(#) isuckatlifen 2007-01-02 04:27:45 PM
ok so he why isnt he going to stay with her what the fuck is wrong with him. she nearly got killed and lost her baby and he has the nerv to break up with her? well off to read the sequal hope its happier because im 2 years too lateAuthor's response
It's because he's nuts! Thanks for reading. -
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(#) amandaVENOM 2007-02-05 06:07:23 PM
i fucking hated the ending!
it was getting good and bam!
thanks for wasting my time!