(Final) Chapter 010
(#) ZOE 2006-05-18 07:24:50 AMYOU CAN'T JUST END THE STORY THERE I WANT THEM TO GET BACK TOGETHER
IT MAKES ME CRY KNOWING THEY DIDN'T GET BACK TOGETHER
YOU BROKE MY HEART NOW THAT YOU HAVE ENDED THE STORY =(
Author's responseWell, dry your eyes, because there's a sequel. It's called "Take Back This Goodbye". I hope it'll bandage your heart back into one. :)
(#) shellyisnothere 2006-05-28 04:23:46 PMI guess all stories don't have good endings... I really did like your story but that ending is really sad...
Author's responseThanks for reviewing... it has a sequel named "Take Back This Goodbye" if you're up to reading that. :) It's kinda sad too...
- Excellent story!! Off to read the follow on.
I would be devestatedly upset at this ending if i didn't know there was a sequel and so i still have hope for Frank and Mina
Author's responseThank you so much, I hope you enjoy the sequel as much as this one. When I went on a hiatus after this first part, people went a bit nutty. :)
(#) Alison 2006-10-24 10:29:43 PMI wont give you hate mail! because i liked how you ended it...it was really good it was the way it was supposed to end even though they made a cute couple this worked out better, poor pete! but i ilke how you added all those bands the used, and FOB and stuff your a really good writer keep up the good work!
Author's responseThank you! Did you read the sequel, Take Back This Goodbye?
(#) dazed and confused 2006-11-17 03:57:19 PMokay..so..
I absolutely love this story..a ton.
but,why not keep going??
I mean..its really good.
but..You did end it quite well.
I would love more..but..if thats all.
Very nice job...:))
Author's responseBut there's a sequel! Take Back This Goodbye, I hope you read it. :)
(#) isuckatlifen 2007-01-02 04:27:45 PMok so he why isnt he going to stay with her what the fuck is wrong with him. she nearly got killed and lost her baby and he has the nerv to break up with her? well off to read the sequal hope its happier because im 2 years too late
Author's responseIt's because he's nuts! Thanks for reading.