by Moonshyne
3 Reviews
Category: My Chemical Romance -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Gerard Way,Ray Toro -
Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2008/11/16 - Updated: 2008/11/16 - 1683 words
Reviews
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(#) easykeys 2008-11-16 04:19:58 AM
Awww, I totally understand why Alyssa is doing what she is doing, and it is good that she is staying sobre and finding a job, she is proving to be a good mother.
I feel sorry for Bob though being used again.
And I'm glad Gerard wants to help :)
And Ray is just awww, a lovely best friend
cant wait for more
dondon xo.
Author's response
Hi there dondon,
She had so many mitigating reasons why she's doing what she's doing. She really wants to be a mother now and try to give Enily a happy home.
I know poor Bob we'll see what happens next chapter.
We'll also see what changed Gerard's mind.
Yeah Ray's the best he'll even tell her when she's wrong.
Thanks.
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He understands now.....I can see why she did it...
I feel so bad for her....
And Bob though....cause he's the one who's going to get hurt again...
Please write more soon....
Author's response
Hi there cute,
Yes he understands and is ready to face his demons regarding what happened that night.
She really wants her daughter and especially since she believes there's something going on.
Poor Bob, I think this time he'll know what he's in for, that's if he even decides to help her.
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(#) Sassy 2008-11-27 05:24:08 AM
Now I feel mean for being angry with her. I should have realised there'd be more under the surface, but that's the beauty of your storytelling - the whole roller coaster of emotions!
It seems you write faster than I read! Sorry I'm still on older chapters but I will catch up!
Sas x
Author's response
Hi there Sassy,
No, no no you're not mean. Just didn't have all the facts. LOL!!
Yes I love to make complex characters there is so much going on underneath.
LOL!! Take your time reading, it's not like the story is going anywhere, so no problem.
Thanks for the review!!