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The Orange Book

by Immortal7 2 Reviews

Kakashi always carries around with himself a certain little orange book. However what if the contents of the book were the farthest thing from what they appeared to be. What if the contents were mo...

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Kakashi - Published: 2008/11/18 - Updated: 2008/11/19 - 2130 words - Complete

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  • The Orange Book

    (#) Mairead 2008-11-18 09:28:55 PM

    Have you thought about looking for a beta? There are some problems with commas here that might be driving your readers away.
  • The Orange Book

    (#) Mairead 2008-11-18 09:30:11 PM

    Whoops! Sorry for giving you the same review twice, I forgot to check who the author was :)

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