He pressed his back against the corner of the one-and-a-half by five foot cage and screamed.
- I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet...
This is quite good...you have an interesting plot line thus far and it's pretty well written.
I'm going to rate it and review the first chapter so that you hopefully get some more reads!!
I'll finish reading this in a bit! :)
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2008-12-18 01:42:56 PMThis is absolutely brilliant.
I've never been so intrigued by a story on this site- EVER- more than I am so by this one. I rated it "insightful" because, well, it is. It's different, so I wanted to call it original, but it's also exciting, so I wanted to rate it that, too, but then I decided that it's such a good representation of the emotional and mental struggle some poor, destroyed people [like your Gerard] have to expierience that I decided it's nothing if not insightful. You are a truly talented writer.