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FACT : You attract more flies with honey than with vinegar.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/11/22 - Updated: 2008/11/23 - 1794 words

Reviews

• You Stole My Breath

  (#) Life_is_42 2008-11-23 02:41:53 PM

  whoa! intenseness and awkward ness (and a protective jon sorta).
  I was so happy to see this update!!!! hoorah!!!!!!!
  
  xoxo
  Lifey

  Author's response

  Awkward and Jon trying to be protective, exactly what I was trying to communicate. Cassia is a bit like a fish out of water, for the first time in her life feeling as though she has no control over the situation. It's unsettling. In the next chapter too she's still testing the water, still trying to find her place on the tour, with all her new acquaintances, and even with her best friend who seems to be slipping away just a bit. I'm really going to try to update more. :) Thanks for sticking around!!

• You Stole My Breath

  (#) Tissamy 2009-01-13 07:56:36 PM

  Aww I just finished reading all ten chapters and was so bummed when i noticed I had to stop. This story is so well written and everything flows together. If there were more I'd be up all night reading them.
  
  Please update soon?
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you for all of your kind words. Just because I wouldn't want to bum anyone out :p I'm really going to make an attempt to update this story more. The chapters may seem a little shaky at first, but once I get back into Cassia's mindset I'm sure the story will come much easier again. : ) I'm really glad you found my story

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