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Friends?

Something is bothering Ryan, and Brendon wants to know what it is. But will he like what it is?

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2008/11/23 - Updated: 2008/11/23 - 1412 words - Complete

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• Friends?

  (#) DC11961 2010-08-05 10:21:01 AM

  How is there no reviews for this story? O.o Anyways, this is REALLY adorable and just full of fluff, which I LOVE! Good job! ^_^ One advice though would be to indent the phrases because it looks a bit messy if you leave it like that. Like, for example something like:
  
  "Hey Ryan! Come here real quick!" Brendon exclaims.
  
  "Coming!" Ryan says back.
  
  You get me? That way it will not only be an incredibly cute story, but visually will be better to a reader. :-)

• Friends?

  (#) rkeeler 2010-08-26 07:44:43 PM

  This was too cute! And of course Ryan cries, he always does. But I liked it!

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