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Tea Party

After the end Hermione throws a tea party for a the girls. The topic? That would be telling.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/11/25 - Updated: 2008/11/25 - 1295 words - Complete

Reviews

• Tea Party

  (#) red_jacobson 2008-11-26 05:58:23 AM

  Cute story, but a couple of errors with characters names jumped out at me. The characters in question are Daphne (Not Dauphine - which, if memory serves, is the name or title of a French noble during the time of Joan of Arc) and Seamus not Shamus (which is a slang term for a private detective)
  
  Other than that, while the story is fairly derivative of multiple others, it's still a cute story that needs to be expanded, it doesn't really end, as written, it just stops.
  
  red

• Tea Party

  (#) LDA 2008-11-26 08:19:32 AM

  fingers crossed it doesn't turn into a Harry is so pussy whipped that he lets his wives control every aspect of his life and has absolutely no say in anything he does and if he ever does try something he gets belittled and torn down by them...

• Tea Party

  (#) Dragon451 2008-12-08 11:44:36 AM

  This is a fun story and I would not be sorry to more of it.

• Tea Party

  (#) ficbob 2008-12-08 08:01:26 PM

  Fun fic
  I am interested in a follow-up that would let us know who is who
  Thanks

• Tea Party

  (#) Aelfwine 2008-12-10 11:22:20 AM

  Cute!
  
  Red's already caught the Daphne and Seamus errors; I didn't see much else off, other than a couple of missing commas and I think that Ficwad sometimes just drops commas for no reason.
  
  Harry and the rest are in for a bit of a surprise, but I reckon they'll enjoy it. ;-)
  
  If Harry's smart (and I'm sure he will be, given his choice in girlfriends), he'll let his wives have the running of his household. Outside in the world he'll have plenty of other venues to be his own man in. They're smart girls, and they'll respect that, I think.

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  (#) thekev 2009-05-01 08:20:16 AM

  great story

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  (#) thekev 2009-05-01 08:20:44 AM

  great story

• Tea Party

  (#) sparky40sw 2009-08-06 08:53:17 AM

  quite fun, although some of those monikers are going to get very very long and annoying.
  
  loved the punch line

• Tea Party

  (#) HJHOWE 2009-11-06 01:00:49 AM

  Great one shot and I love the last remark. Its just classic.

• Tea Party

  (#) Celexs 2010-04-19 06:15:26 PM

  Entertaining for sure, would be a great starting point for a few more chapters.
  
  Cel

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