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And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

Pete and Patrick in third grade. Eventually Peterick, but not for a little while.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2008/11/29 - Updated: 2008/11/29 - 753 words

Reviews

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) IceQueenz 2008-11-29 11:13:59 AM

  Haha I like it. I thought the ending was cute.

  Author's response

  lol, thanks. it may take a while, cause i have wicked writer's block, but i'll try.

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-11-29 03:59:01 PM

  If you could continue it would be nice =]
  
  I thought it was cute lol, i'd love to see how it continues.

  Author's response

  Thanks. :D
  
  and i'll try to update. (once i think of what to write, lol)

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) KuroNeko_ 2008-11-29 05:05:25 PM

  Heh, awesome story. So cute. x3 So pessimistic. e.e
  
  xBrantly

  Author's response

  Thanks sour skittles!
  
  im gonna think of what to write for chapter two, mmeanwhile, you shall update para-chem....please? lol.

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) sock_monkey 2008-11-30 05:48:51 PM

  Aww that was adorable. I think you should deffinately continue.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the encouragement!
  
  i'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as i can!

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) Emerra 2008-12-01 06:16:20 PM

  HI KRISTINE! I FOUNDS YOU! I'm so brilliant. xD I liked your story! I don't know why you didn't show it to me before!

  Author's response

  lol, megan youre such a nerd.
  
  i didnt show to you cause i think it sucks...duh? lol, thanks buddy. now i must think of what to write for the next chapter.

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) falloutboyrox728 2008-12-03 09:02:33 PM

  It's very cute. I can imagine little Patrick being a shy little nerd. ^___^
  
  Please, THIS STORY CAN NOT BE A ONE-SHOT BECAUSE I WON'T LET YOU!
  
  ^________________^

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) alex_-nods- 2008-12-05 12:39:31 AM

  awww this is really cute haha
  you should definently continue!

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) Hellsangel666 2008-12-17 12:40:23 PM

  update plz plz plz plz this story could rock[it probably will]so plz continue with it.

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-01-03 07:05:37 PM

  awe that was so cute. =]

• And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat

  (#) Helloangel 2009-01-16 08:13:18 PM

  It was cute. The whole image of a little kid sitting alone on a park bench was disheartening. :(
  I can't picture a third grader saying 'Jesus Christ!' though.

  Author's response

  Haha, thank you! And yeah, it made me kind of sad too.
  
  Lol, he's a weird third grader. I said in third grade, too. Oh no! Does that mean.....I'm weird???? Oh wait, I kinda already knew that...
  
  XD
  
  ---
  x. X Kristine

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