Pete and Patrick in third grade. Eventually Peterick, but not for a little while.
- Haha I like it. I thought the ending was cute.
Author's responselol, thanks. it may take a while, cause i have wicked writer's block, but i'll try.
(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-11-29 03:59:01 PMIf you could continue it would be nice =]
I thought it was cute lol, i'd love to see how it continues.
Author's responseThanks. :D
and i'll try to update. (once i think of what to write, lol)
- Heh, awesome story. So cute. x3 So pessimistic. e.e
Author's responseThanks sour skittles!
im gonna think of what to write for chapter two, mmeanwhile, you shall update para-chem....please? lol.
(#) sock_monkey 2008-11-30 05:48:51 PMAww that was adorable. I think you should deffinately continue.
Author's responseThanks for the encouragement!
i'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as i can!
- HI KRISTINE! I FOUNDS YOU! I'm so brilliant. xD I liked your story! I don't know why you didn't show it to me before!
Author's responselol, megan youre such a nerd.
i didnt show to you cause i think it sucks...duh? lol, thanks buddy. now i must think of what to write for the next chapter.
(#) falloutboyrox728 2008-12-03 09:02:33 PMIt's very cute. I can imagine little Patrick being a shy little nerd. ^___^
Please, THIS STORY CAN NOT BE A ONE-SHOT BECAUSE I WON'T LET YOU!
(#) alex_-nods- 2008-12-05 12:39:31 AMawww this is really cute haha
you should definently continue!
(#) Hellsangel666 2008-12-17 12:40:23 PMupdate plz plz plz plz this story could rock[it probably will]so plz continue with it.
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-01-03 07:05:37 PMawe that was so cute. =]
(#) Helloangel 2009-01-16 08:13:18 PMIt was cute. The whole image of a little kid sitting alone on a park bench was disheartening. :(
I can't picture a third grader saying 'Jesus Christ!' though.
Author's responseHaha, thank you! And yeah, it made me kind of sad too.
Lol, he's a weird third grader. I said in third grade, too. Oh no! Does that mean.....I'm weird???? Oh wait, I kinda already knew that...
x. X Kristine