[Naruto/Sasuke] In which Naruto makes himself at home and it sucks to be Kakashi. Sequel to "Avoiding the Issue"
(#) permetaform 2006-04-17 07:54:55 AM
hilarious and in-character
(#) Maldoror 2006-04-17 04:24:29 PM
Kakashi so in character, particularly that brief flinch of pain when Sasuke tries to throw away what Kakashi would have liked the option to keep.
(#) FireNinja7 2006-05-30 09:43:21 AM
"Naruto, that was not an invitation to explain."
LOL! That was awesome!
This is lovely. XD Brilliantly funny; one of the few SasuNaru fics that's kept everyone in character. Excellent job. :D
One typo-- "Like Konoha being flatten to the ground..." I think you meant "flattened" there.
(#) FireNinja7 2006-06-06 10:02:48 AM
I know I already reviewed once, but I forgot to mention something.
I absolutely love the way you end you fics. This and Avoiding the Issue both left me practically falling out of my chair laughing. I hope you are going to continue this.
(#) makani 2006-06-30 11:04:47 PM
I've come back to read this story, along with Avoiding the Issue, many times, and it always makes me laugh--so grats, you've actually impressed a long-time skeptic who has waded through thousands of bad writing in multiple fandoms over the last 3 years.
(#) Andrea 2007-02-02 06:10:37 PM
you make this story soooo good omg your a genius! well i loved it!
(#) fairady 2007-06-16 02:35:14 PM
I absolutely love the whole 'plausible deniability' thing the guys have going here. It just makes everything far more humorous than it probably should be.