Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > It Kills Me Seeing Your Face [Sequel to Brought Together, Torn Apart]
(#) ilo9vemcrgmfrb 2008-12-17I'm loving this story.
Quite a bit.
I was definitely sitting on the edge of my seat. haha
Author's responseThank you, Im glad you were feeling the excitment!
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-12-17Well, you've killed off Gerard ... how much worse can it get? LMAO ... I'm just kidding you know, right?
I think it's great that you've had the guys kidnap her. But ... how are they going to get away with it is the real question. I know you said you're writing it as you go along, and sometimes that works out, but I usually try to think of a few different scenarios for a story and then start typing and see if I'm "feelin'" a particular one. Not sure if that makes sense.
I liked that the lady thought Mikey and Bob were a gay couple! rotfl
Author's responseLol, I know it is just getting worse and worse.
I totally get what you mean about "feelin" it, I do that a lot.
Haha the gay part XD
Well tbh I see the word discontinued coming up.
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-12-17dude that was awesome! Update like now!
(#) PossiblyInsane 2008-12-17yes, im sorry, this is going downhill.
sorry, again, but it's been going downhill since you killed Gerard.
um, bring Frank and Harper back in and it might pick up.
Author's responseDont be sorry for telling me what you think, I thank you for that actually.
Anyone can review and be like awww i like this story update now, but it's harder to give critisism, so thanks.
I know myself this story is going downhill but I just dont want to discounitnue it an leave everyone hanging but I think I might have to, somebody could do a pardoy if they were that bothered lol.
But thanks again for your honesty
(#) izziebella 2008-12-17lol I thought it was funny that the lady thought that Mikey and bob are gay...
and to answer your question, not at all it's getting really intresting. I can't wait to see if they get away with it or not.
Yeah I get the writing as I go along thing, I do that too. I agree with canustakemyheart on that one.
I'm happy that they finally got her back though =DDD
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