(#) PerfesserN 2008-12-25 11:28:36 AMNice and easy does it. I like the pace in this story and you've written the kids as adorable. At some point, thought, being kids, they will need to test their limits and get into some kind of trouble.
Hey, just because its a fantasy doesn't mean you can't have real people in it!
Write on, write on.
- I'm liking the pace of Harry and Hermione's relationship, but I could use a little more drama. Have the kids get into some kind of trouble or have Ginny cause a scene of some kind when she sees Harry and Hermione being romantic in public.
The story isn't bad, it just needs some action or drama to make it interesting. :)
- I do like the way Harry & Hermione have slowly been drawn to each other time; it should be interesting to watch other folks' reactions to this event. I rather suspect the kids will be getting into something before too long, it's just in the nature of being a kid.