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• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) skuert 2008-12-29

  Overall a nice chapter though Harry is far too trusting to Christine in this chapter.
  any chance young harry will leave the dursleys again???

  Author's response

  I disagree. Harry tells her just enough to answer her questions without really telling her anything. The Unspeakables have been established to know about horcruxes in this fic already, so why shouldn't Christine know about them?
  
  Harry will eventually be busted out again, but Dumbledore can be remarkably persistent when he wants to be.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2008-12-29

  Why did the older Harry not take the younger Harry with him?
  
  

  Author's response

  Several reasons:
  
  Neither Harry nor Christine know how to take care of a child.
  
  Harry has his mission, and Christine has to follow him, so one can't stay home and watch him while the other works.
  
  They obviously can't take young Harry to work with them.
  
  Since all of the people Harry used to know are either toddlers or haven't met him yet, his only options are Hawthorne and POSSIBLY HMO Hexlie, although she hasn't been developed enough as a character to be a viable option. I imagine it's also not good form to ask your boss to babysit for you.
  
  Christine, with her abrasive personality, probably doesn't have a plethora of friends to ask either. She could possibly ask her parents, but her suddenly showing up with a three-year-old child might raise some awkward questions, even if they know it's not hers.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) ubersnakelord 2008-12-29

  Are you leaving little Harry there again? That´s just sad, how the older one would not expect Dumbledore to do this is just stupidity.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) hptrump 2008-12-29

  If the older Harry is suppose to be this smart he should figure that Dumbledore would get little Harry back. Seems a little Dursley disappearing is in order.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) Cateagle 2008-12-29

  Hmm, I suspect that Harry's going to have to work harder at taking care of his younger self; and at checkmating Dumbles. The bit about Koschei was good and tis reader did recognize the name. One small background nit to pick, though; a "Crown Victoria"? That's a Ford-US product and I rather doubt it'd be used in the UK; you'd be better off going with the Ford-UK or Ford-Europe equivalent though that might require a spot of research.

  Author's response

  Yeah, so I've been told. >_

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) biged78 2008-12-29

  Evidently Harry forgot about Bumbledore's toys. Hopefully he makes a return visit.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) dennisud 2008-12-29

  What is the point of Harry rescuing himself when he hears Dumbles coming in. I must know that his little action would draw Albus from Hogwarts, or is that the reason?
  
  Unless it is a ruse its seems a wasted action.
  
  still you got me hooked to read more!
  
  dennisudo

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) jsdailey 2008-12-29

  Hmmm. Interesting chapter. Too bad that Harry lacked the forethought regarding Dumbles' persistence.
  
  Ahh well, I guess we'll see how this turns out. I can't wait.

• Harry Potter and the Endwar Project

  (#) Ross_the_Boss 2009-04-04

  Interesting,although the fact that Harry left Harry with people that the old fool could get him back from

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