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bass drum!what an answer?
4 ReviewsONE SHOT*holly and her friends are on a plane to america asking eachother stupid questions,but what happens when there idols hear there answers?
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bass drum!what an answer?
(#) ipanicdaily 2008-12-29 06:07:04 PM
That was cute and funny. I especially like when Frank said Gee had the crush on him xD
you just need to work on your grammar and punctuation. You know like capitalizing names and such.
xoxo Tabi -
bass drum!what an answer?
(#) neve 2008-12-30 08:24:42 AM
Hey, i thought your story was funny and a great one-shot idea. Everyone needs a laugh at christmas.
You might want to check your spelling and punctuation (i suck at punctuation) because it would make the story easier to read.
Well done for a great idea. I was cringing for them when MCR were sitting behind them - so funny. -
bass drum!what an answer?
(#) moonpig 2008-12-30 08:28:55 AM
I really liked your idea and you made me laugh. Your story would be so much better if you checked it through the spell check. I noticed it had been rated as illiterate by someone - don't let that you get you down. You had a great idea and making people laugh is a gift in itself -
bass drum!what an answer?
(#) myfearisfalling 2008-12-30 04:18:17 PM
i like it it made me laugh thanks lol
i agree with moonpig dont let people get you down by that!!you could check your spelling!!but part from that its a really good story,maybe more chapters?think about it.
xoxoAmy