Gah, yes the chapter title is incredibly unoriginal :/ But hope the chapter is okay :]
(#) harlequingirl-x 2009-01-16 02:43:49 AMI now know why you have no reviews!
I didnt get the message to say that it was updated so maybe you should just like put an extra space or some shit and then people will read it cause it wasnt there lol
hope that helps
PS. i liked this chapter =]
(#) frerard_is_love 2009-05-15 11:09:39 AMOkay This story is AMAZINGLY cool and everything, and i am being completely nice as always, but i hope your up for a bit of constructive criticism if you catch my drift. . .
Okay ill give it to you strait.
I DONT LIKE JAMIA. She kissed Frank!! Not cool.
If you ask me you should definitely do some more Frerard, cos i mean they had the kiss and Frank admited he kinda liked it and all, and then all Frereardness just . . stopped. So pwease pwease pwease add some Frerardness im begging you!!!
Also, i think there SHOULD be a bit more drama. some mix ups, make it confusing, and i reckon Mikey mite fall for Jamia hint hint ^^
Lol just my dumb advice, you dont have to listen to it. . . great story though really, keep it up ^^