Gerard get's cheated on by Kat, a nasty argument ensues and tears are shed. Yet out of the fucked up and shitty situation comes a lovely lesson. Read review for the love of God xxx
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-12 04:17:24 PMThis was really good actually. I could totally put myself in Gerard's place in this one. It was like a triple whammy - she cheated on him ... said the guy was better AND bigger ... and said she'd want to do it again. Ugh. Any one of those would have been enough to get to me. I think I would have acted exactly the same too 'cause I'm not the type who would cheat on someone. My very first girlfriend cheated on me and it really did make me feel like utter shit. In a way I'm kinda thankful though looking back on it - that it was my FIRST girlfriend because it really did make me not want to ever do that to someone.
Anyway, good job!
Author's responseThankyou for reading :) Another reason you're my fave author - you review my stories!
I was a lil' worried with this one 'cos I got inspiration from another guy's story so I was hoping it wouldn't seem too way off what Gerard is like. Then again saying that nobody except the people that actually know him really knows what he's like cos I and yourself are just people who respect him and are inspired by him. ( I hate using the word fan for the myself because then I start to think of all the sad preteen girls who write about how much they want to fuck him and write slash fanfic on him)
BTW how did you find out about ficwad (just curious)
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-12 06:06:01 PMWell, you're welcome! I like getting reviews myself so I try really hard to review stuff that I read =D
I found out about this site just by googling "MCR fanfic" and I liked the look of this site the best and it seemed to have a lot of active stories/authors.
BTW, have you been over to the site that easykeys made? http://blackparade.yuku.com ... it's just a message board with a bunch of us from the MCR section of ficwad here that just wanna talk about random shit. LOL
(#) lalalovexjeje 2009-01-13 07:51:40 AMI really loved this story. I liked it for many reason but especially because rignt now my best friend is going through all this same exact crap and she's just devistated about the whole situation. I hope she gets to a point like Gerard was and able to just atleast start to move on. It's a really crappy thing to happen to anyone. I also loved how your inspiration sprung over the article and the song. Its funny because I do the same thing. When ever I get into a writing mode its usually a song that inspires me and then I end up making a playlist through out the story. lol.
p.s. maybe a continuation if its not a one shot... Like the after affects of having your heart broken and how he gets back on his feet..maybe forming the band, meeting someone new.. etc. just a thought though
(#) JustAnotherFacade 2009-01-13 11:00:39 AMI had a real witty response/review to how awesome that was.
but I got really sidetracked by your notes at the bottom. I haven't laughed that much for ages! You've made my day =)
Author's responseYay I made someone smile (you of course!!) :) I'm glad you liked it and my little blog thingy at the bottom xx Leah