Things start to move a little too fast for Harry.
Pretty good update...it's a good thing that you got Ginny out of the way. She's not the type to pine forever...just for a while.
Looking forward to more.
Good chapter. This is shaping up to be a very good story.
(#) Cateagle 2009-01-13 09:26:41 AM
O-kay, good to see that Ginny and Neville got together, they make a good couple and it does leave things a bit more open for Hermione. Meanwhile, I wonder who'll be the next to find out what's been going on. It certainly seems like Harry now has Alastor and Bill on his side.
(#) Wolfric 2009-01-13 11:10:56 PM
Fine chapter. Harry gets to tell Hermione about it at supper. Thanks for writing. W.
a surprisingly good story,I am glad I came across this story.. even in spite of the awful stuff HP is going through, it seems as if there is a chance for happiness.
(#) dennisud 2009-01-14 09:15:10 AM
A great story and with a very good foundation. Still the angst meter is a bit high here. And I know from expireince that Depression and self loathing doesn't keep a guy down for long.
Oh and Please see if Harry can Help Luna regain herself. She's one of those characters that can be a huge catalyst!
Plus Ron needs his concience back!
(#) anwillimas 2009-01-14 09:29:04 AM
I was not too sure about this to start but you have managed to get me hooked. I will second dennisud's request about a bit of Luna healing so she can interact with this story.
(#) yargew 2009-01-15 10:40:02 PM
I am seriously impressed with this story. I hope you can continue in the splendid manner in which you have begun! I couldn't rate it because it already pins the meter with a 5.
Please keep it up and please got more chapters posted!
(#) PcMan 2009-01-16 08:48:39 AM
More! You must write More. Now!
Seriously though, this is a very gripping story. And unlike most HP fics it is coming through as quite believable, too. Reading something with good grammar and spelling is also pleasant. Thanx!
(#) bjon66 2009-01-26 11:33:49 AM
Turning into a great story.. Can't wait for the next chapter...