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Cats and Robbers

How does searching for a cat lead a bungling detective into solving a high profile crime? Only Victor Callaway knows.

Category: Humor - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody - Characters:  - Published: 2006/03/20 - Updated: 2006/03/20 - 4393 words - Complete

Reviews

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-23 05:57:20 PM

  I see this was probably formatted for another archive. It's within legible bounds, but not my favorite.
  
  The first few sentences could stand to share a paragraph. It would make the "Victor Callaway at your service" one-liner stand out more.
  
  More later.

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-24 07:08:53 PM

  A flamethrower in the wallet? Intriguing.

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-24 07:09:15 PM

  A flamethrower in the wallet? Intriguing.

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-24 07:09:15 PM

  A flamethrower in the wallet? Intriguing.
  
  
  
  Author\'s Response: Throwaway line, that one. I couldn't think of a way to use it without resorting to slapstick... not that I'm averse to slapstick as this work shows.

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) hobbeth 2006-06-10 09:59:51 AM

  He has got to be the most clueless detective in the annals of history. And the luckiest.
  
  Good story; well written.

• Cats and Robbers

  (#) fruit_addict 2007-04-03 07:01:36 PM

  Hey good story although a bit cliche. Ditective that doesn't know what he's doing happens to stumble into a big heist or murder or kidnapping. Good imagery though. A few spelling mistakes but still good.

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