Was the damge you inflicted. I've just spruced it up a 'lil. TRIGGER WARNING.
(#) Leah270193 2009-01-18 09:54:51 AMIf any of you are wondering about the strange story name it's actually a line from a david gray song I was listening to. The song is called 'flesh' I think. I really hope this is the final version of this story I've spent ages editing it and trying to make it better. I wouldn't mind bad review ratings in people just told me why they gave me it and how to make it better at least!
But anyway, I'm really grateful people read my stories as I put alot of time and effort into them which in turn helps me to get out a lot of emotion.
And I guess if you are reading this right now thank you soooooooo much for reviewing xxxxxxx
- You've worked hard on this and it shows. I could really feel his anguish.
It's hard when people rate you down without saying why. It's cowardly and sometimes jealousy. Please don't be disheartened and keep going with this.
Author's responseThank you so much for reviewing this story I really am very grateful because as I said I worked hard. I also reviewed one of youre stories to return the favour. Oh, and the comment on not getting down about bad ratings also cheered me up. Your a star* :) xx
- This is great!! Keep going with it, definitely!!
Don't worry about bad ratings, I've noticed that someone seems to come in and rate down stories that are perfectly good. Whoever it is probably thinks they're funny, but you gotta feel sorry for someone who thinks like that.
Author's responseThanks for the review, I’m glad you liked my story it made all the effort worth while. To return the lovely favour I reviewed your story. The comment on the stupid bad ratings people give for no reason also made me feel a lot happier. You’re an angel 0:) xxx
(#) canustakemyheart 2009-01-20 12:45:40 AMI think you did a great job with the "redo" on this one. I liked all the additions and changes you made.
Author's responseThanks! I'm really glad you liked them. Again, thank you for the help you gave me last time. I even asked people on the forum and only one person got back to me yet didn't really 'help' me they just said they really like it (not much good if you're struggling like I was).
But your original re-do on my paragraph really inspired me and showed me how I could have made it flow better and be more expressive with my OWN stuff. And doing my own thing is a lot more rewarding than just copy and pasting someone else’s work; even if it was brilliantly written!!
I'll go review one of your stories now, cos you reviewed mine (it's apparently very good Karma to return favours) :)
(#) disturbedangel6 2009-01-20 07:51:45 PMHey this was good xD
I'm glad I read this at this moment
Coz ppl are ditching me, my bday for a party
Author's responseAwww, Happy birthday. Evil ppl for ditching you lol :) Thankyou sooo much for reviewing my story I'm glad you liked it.