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Give Up Tonight
4 ReviewsMy attempt at poetry...
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Give Up Tonight
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-01-25 01:47:45 PM
Wow. That was really deep. It also sorta made me realize that I'm not completely alone in certain respects.
Anyway, wonderful. Just...don't try to escape just yet, okay? Promise that you'll try for just a little bit longer. You truly have no idea how badly families and lives are ripped apart when suicide is committed. [I should know.] If you tell somebody- anybody- about how you're feeling, it helps immensely.
Exx-oh-exx, AlbiAuthor's response
Thanks so much. I've tried to talk, it just seems that there aren't enough people willing to listen. So that's where poetry and writing come in. They help me vent my depression.
And no, you're not alone. ^^ -
Give Up Tonight
(#) Emo_musik_chick 2009-03-05 03:21:02 PM
If you EVER need to talk, ever, I'm always available to listen. I never judge, and you can talk to me about anything. I hate to think of you sitting there and quietly suffering by yourself =[
-Albi -
Give Up Tonight
(#) frerard_is_love 2009-05-15 08:42:34 AM
Oh gosh that was good, better than my poetry. Mabey ill put some of mine on this site . . anyway, i agree with everybody. DO NOT try kill yourself or even thinking about if you can, trust me its not worth it. Not to sound like a counciller or anything, kay??
hugs
XO Nannonz
p.s deffo keep up the poetry, and the stories!! =P