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Because It's the Custom

by Aelfwine 5 Reviews

Spending a year living abroad in America, Harry, Ginny, and Luna Potter obey local custom by taking their children trick or treating.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Ginny,Harry,Luna - Published: 2009/02/14 - Updated: 2009/02/15 - 843 words - Complete

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  • Because It's the Custom

    (#) DrT 2009-02-15 04:21:56 AM

    In a word

    cute!

    Author's response

    Thank you!
  • Because It's the Custom

    (#) siaru 2009-02-15 05:22:51 AM

    ...And here I thought, with that lineup and the intro and warnings, it'd be a game of Spin The PolyJuice; guess that comes later. I like this slice-of-life; will there be more eventually, perhaps?

    btw I think you reversed Thorn (the voiceless 'th') and Eth (the voiced 'th', or 'dh') in your outro.

    Author's response

    Thank you very much!

    Hmm, spin the polyjuice? Could be interesting, I suppose. Although somehow I doubt even Luna's kinky enough to enjoy making out whilst polyjuiced as a house elf. ;-)

    I'd never really thought about writing more in this 'verse, but I suppose I might think about it. (When nineteenth century India and the seventeenth century Caribbean aren't eating my brain. ;-)

    btw I think you reversed Thorn (the voiceless 'th') and Eth (the voiced 'th', or 'dh') in your outro.

    You're right, I did. Will have to fix that. Thanks for catching it.
  • Because It's the Custom

    (#) dennisud 2009-02-15 05:30:50 PM

    Nice oneshots!

    Maybe later try this trio, H/Hr/L.

    Think of it as a challenge!

    dennisud

    ;-)

    Author's response

    Thank you!

    Yes, at some point I do need to try H/Hr/L. I'm not sure why I haven't, to be honest, as I quite enjoy that threesome. Then again, half the time when I start out to write H/G/L I end up writing H/Hr/G/L.

    Well, we'll see. Maybe I'll turn out some H/Hr/L soon. Grad school's eating my life, but I should be able to squeeze in a bit of writing time this weekend. We'll just have to see. ;-)
  • Because It's the Custom

    (#) Esus 2010-05-14 07:26:38 AM

    Nice story, but I mentally cringed at the unoriginal names of the children.
  • Because It's the Custom

    (#) Arkarian23 2012-04-17 07:29:11 AM

    You know, I always wondered what happened to the wrappers when I went out trick or treating.

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