“Thinking back, Halloween nights has always been life changing, in one way or another. The night the Goblet spat out my name… Well, that was just the beginning of this story…”
(#) dareycow 2009-02-24 07:25:22 PM
Awesome. Keep up the good work. Usually I don't like stories where its a blatant rip off a movie so you pretty much know the main characters character already. But you were upfront about it, and the way your writing it makes me not give a damn. Nice :D
(#) ecorate 2009-02-25 11:26:29 AM
nice keep it comeing
Outstanding chapter. Good story.
(#) jabarber69 2009-03-16 08:46:14 AM
interesting little story...although I read something similiar within the last couple of months, but like I said similiar but then again not...but why would he go to hermione, if I were him and wanted to leave, then I would....
(#) 143455 2009-03-16 09:20:44 AM
Good story. I'd love to see more of it.
I can really see The Chronicles of Riddick coming out at me in this chapter. Really well done so far I think. Please continue writing.